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What word or words can a writer use when they want to make their story more descriptive without driving up the word count a writer might ask? This is particularly important when a writer has a word count limit to deal with. This is when a good thesaurus is helpful.

For instance, portly, obese, plump give the reader a different visual than just using the word fat and they don’t add any extra words to the word count.

PegFinley_picLean, lanky and emancipated  all work for versions of skinny. For action words such as walked, try using ambled, sauntered, stomped or skipped depending on the context of the story.

 

 

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